Hey Sam, your story about the stray cat place has some problems.

While the story is interesting, it does not appear to be personal, rather you are telling about the place, but not from a personal angle. Additionally, the photo provided is actually Shutterstock, but you did not properly credit them.

anyway, we only like personal stories, so if you were in fact at this cat place, you will need to rewrite the piece to make obvious that you were there., hopefully with your own photos.