Hi Laurie, sorry for the delay in responding, I am finally back in my office with my desktop computer which allows me to answer notes.

I read your edited story, and you have made good changes to it, making it more personal. However, it remains "an informational story." The title gives it away, and your statements regarding the 9 items, make it informational. I hate to hassle people over writing, but this style of story is not suitable for Catness. Would you like me to re write a bit of it to show you what I mean?

Once again, sorry for the delays, I am recovering from a stroke so am a bit slow.